Computers and Composition
12, 145-159 (1995)
Online Writing Labs (OWLS): A Taxonomy of Options and Issues
MICHAEL PEMBERTON Utzitwsity
0f’Illirwi.~
As increasing numbers of writing centers consider instituting Online Writing Labs (OWLS) as adjuncts to existing tutorial services, careful plonning decisions must be made about the nature, purpose, and feasibility of online offerings. In this article, we offer an overview and schema for understanding some of the most frequently used network technologies available for OWLS-e-mail, Gopher, Worldwide Web (WWW), newsgroups, synchronous chat systems, and automated file retrieval (AFR) systems. We also consider ways in which writing centers’ choices among these technologies are impacted by such factors as user access, network security, computer illiteracy, institutional missions, writing center goals, computing center priorities, and computer progrommers’ attitudes. Successful OWLS, we believe, are those which navigate institutional and technological constraints while still managing to enhance the services provided writers and to uphold pedagogical goals.
cyberspace Online
Writing Internet
writing
Lab (OWL) resources
centers tutoring
in writing
online online
centers
writing
centers
computers electronic
in writing
writing
centers
services
Writing centers using
computers are not a new phenomenon, but extending tutorial services by going online is, and the term Online Writing Lab (OWL) has gained popularity as a name for such projects. As writing centers move into this new online environment, there is great potential, but planning and shaping of effective, user-friendly OWLS takes considerable thought and energy. Attempting only to replicate familiar faceto-face tutorial settings in an electronic, text-oriented environment can lead to frustration and to defeat as OWL planners find themselves unable to simulate all characteristics of effective tutorials. Instead, it is important to recognize that OWLS can have a number of very different configurations-configurations that take advantage of the strengths of online environments and that work with, not against, both local conditions and writing center theory. For those colleagues interested in the shapes of OWLS that have already taken wing and for those exploring options, considering configurations, and/or weighing issues, we offer a model that outlines some choices and relates them to degrees of interaction and time-displacement, as well as to institutional and writing center concerns. We hope that by doing so, we will offer useful considerations for configuring OWLS. In Althoughthe
names of the co-authors of this essay are. by default. listed alphabetically. they would prefer
some alternative. nonhierarchical
means of characterizing the equal contributions made to thi\ collaboratively
written article. Correspondence and request\ for reprints should be sent to Muriel Harris. University, West Lafayette. IN 47907-1356, Department
of
English.
University
Department of English. Purdue
e-mail: harrismfir mace.cc.purdue.edu, of
Illinois.
Urbana-Champaign,
or 10 Michael Pemherton. IL
61801.
e-mail:
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addition.
we hope others will
\ee OWLS
as yet another service offered by writing
which enhances and expands present work, valuable and effective
in writing
particular
partly
combination
to be offered svhtem.
center will
whereas
about drafts
that both
students
providing complex As
opportunities
specific or flexible
and tutors
view
resource\.
All
possible
For
center from campus.
dynamic
Generally
technologies
example.
using
all or
restrictions
this n&cl
for example-
offerings
mm
is
the writer.
The
interaction
to personal
interaction.
Worldwide
Webs
decontextualizcd for variation. newsgroups. particular permit
variations
in
whether
two kinds individual
Gopher,
immediate. Newsgroups,
online e-mail.
immediate.
Conversations
file
queries
fcnturcs. in possible
and interactive
between
center online. according to can
between the service
:~nd
Users
are handled chat systems.
for
systems.
or
cxamplc.
a time delay between the moment in which
the inquiry
need about
systcm4
responses. according to
or over ;I period are structured while
ol ti)r
sitting
at
that they can then respond to. on the other hand. do not allow
person-to-resource
mediated by an intervening
questions
OI- give directions
and automated file retrieval
without
chat systems,
of contact differ
immcdiatcly
and
reactive.
contcxtualizcd
and in possible
and points
ask questions
inquires
text-specific
interactive.
inquiries
These
arc synchronous
to ask tutors Thcsc
arc Gophers
systems.
to simple
responses
are indirect.
or
time dimension
for example.
retrieval
and they receive immediate person-to-person
that exist
into four categories
dimension
interactions
and responses
interactions.
ot not
as ;I ccntcr at another
when putting ;L writing
responses
allow students
of computerized
WWW.
computer terminals. direct,
which
model
and does
programming
relationships
dimension.
automated
and rhetorical
Thi4
the
be used
on the other hand. ranges t‘rom automated reaction
provide standardized
and c-mail. problems
will
may prevent a writing
purposes
can be grouped
At the other end of the interaction
a high degree of variation
These time.
systems
and
Ii)1
ofUer more
t’actorh in
I which
reductive
at one institution
some critical
On one side of this
(WWWs)
they
assistance.
or reaction to delayed response
dimension.
have strengths
important
clearly
site-specific
illustrates
interaction
students
or offering
of access arc better
their relative tl~,~gt~~c of’ir7~crrrc~tio77 and the tli.v/llrrc.c,77rc,77t i/7 ri777c. The range from immediate
with
onscrcen
because
ti)r online
models.
on e-mail
these interactions
online
wc ofl’cr Figure
capacity and pedagogical opportunity
speaking.
to standardi~cd
typch
it in the same: way and for the SUIIC
Nevcrthclcss.
technological
of the opportunities like
then a
assistance.
writers.
li)r writin, (7 centers.
and intersections.
all
hardware.
Some
online
xccss
these potential arc prcl&-able
types
ways to interact with
our consideration
encompass
other
m-vice4
or to a Gopher
agrccmcnt.
simllltaneollsly
of undcrstandin, (7 and interrelating
technology/pedagogy contact points
to provide
and subject-verb
and limitations.
information;
one mans
to discuss
choose only
to create r?r-lrctrl ~c’~i~ir~~y .s/MK~~s. chatting
students
be determined
don’t knmv how, to u\e these services.
might
easy gateways to Internet
and weaknesses.
will
by types 01‘ writing
want to choose other vt’nucs for providing
some centers
may wish
till- an OWL
provide access to newsgroup\
comma usage. resume formats.
others
writers
and/or systems
doesn’t
or if most
probably
the same token.
handouts-on
INTERACTIONS
available on campus and partly
If ;I campus
for example.
writing By
online.
FOR OWL
of software
by computer facilities
center!,.
what WC‘find so
center tutorials.
A MODEL The
but not as a service displacing
virtual
contact
in
the same
space, and usually
way.
require
is made and the moment when ;I
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interactive
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synchronous
chat
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1: A model of computer
interactions.
response is returned. Under some circumstances, these conditions may be sufficient for writers’ needs and preferable for a writing center’s daily operations. Interestingly enough, we decided to collaborate on this article, in part, because though we each opted to institute online writing assistance at our respective campuses-Purdue University and the University of Illinois-at about the same time, we either chose or were forced to use completely different avenues for providing that assistance. In Purdue’s first configuration of its OWL (now incorporated into a much larger complex of options), students could use either an automated file-retrieval system or an e-mail dropbox. At Illinois, students can use either a dedicated newsgroup or a branch of the campus Gopher system. Purdue’s OWL has developed and grown since its inception, partly in response to problems we perceived and partly because we started to explore new options and services. Dave Taylor, the system designer at Purdue, has written WORDS (Writers’ On-line Reference Desk Services), a software program for local use that serves as a writer’s desk too-a set of references for writers linked to the campus network-and Purdue now has a Gopher site and a WWW page, with both serving several purposes. Neither Illinois nor Purdue has, as yet, established an online chat system. Our reasons for selecting-or not selecting-these systems as extensions of our writing centers should become clear as we describe each system.
AUTOMATED
FILE
RETRIEVAL
Automated file retrieval (AFR) systems vary in their mechanics and in the means by which files can bc requested. but they generally require two things: (a) a user-owned e-mail account from which requests can be sent and to which files can be returned, and (b) a formal command structure that will tell the writing center’s computer program what to do with requests it receives. Purdue’s OWL provides an example of how such a system can be structured. We offer it here as representative. The Purdue AFR is located at an e-mail Internet address that also supports the Writing Lab’s interactive e-mail OWL (which also responds to user messages either sent directly or through WORDS). When an e-mail message is received, the OWL system first scans the Subject: header for information. If the keywords “owl-request” appear, the message is handled by AFR; if any additional or other words appear in this line, the text of the message is saved in the writing center’s e-mail box for handling by a tutor. Once the OWL system has determined that a user wishes to use AFR. it checks the message’s first line to
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request a list of files filename).
what sort of request is being made. Typically.
to request ;I help file with intitrmation
commands:
available for downloading.
At Purdue,
these commands
and “Send<
or to request ;1 specific
art:.
Everything
rc\pectivcly.
cont‘iguration
The
University
in that it has some online
have three
“Send
to
file (by its unic!uo
Help.”
“Send
In&x.”
in the mesrage beyond these few keywords
and after the request has been responded
are purged from the syatcm.’
AFRs
about using the systctn.
to. virtually
of Richmond’s
is
al! trace\ of its aistcncc
writing
center ha\ ;I \imitar
interactive cxcrciscs
and quick rckrcncc \het’t\ fix txtltx of punctuation. dyte. xx! nxchanicx. plus advice &oets on pwwriting. writing. met tcvising fEssid. 1993; tfiukcy. 19%). Thcx arc avail;~hle in the Univct-sity of Richmond’\ public
labs as well
as in the lvriting
center is also bllil~ii~?~ an online AFRs
that
predictable.
will-assuming invariant
system
capacity
anywhere
from
the
ways.
of time t’or the system
their
mai t-reader profr;ims. offers
files.
Dependin, (r on the volume delay
to several
(At Purdue,
and mdil’y
over
When
\z.riting
requests
to it computct in
must wail varying
Icngths
of usc‘r tral‘t‘ic and on tbc and response
the rcspon\e
can bc
(either
21 list
users can read andi~~r maniputatc
ti)r cxampte.
handouts
at Austin‘\
correctly-respoIlrl
rcc!ucst
between
minutes.
iiicutty
across campus arc arlviscd ncccis.
) Purdue’s conctrns
be described
according
ol‘
it wifh
100 hanclouts on ~r~liiiii~~Ir ant! mechanics. on writing
language and con&ales\.
as will
.scnd c-mail
r~‘qucsts. users
text t‘itc) ih t‘inalty rcccivcd.
[hat they czn downtoad
of T+zts
in addition to other scrGcc\.
have been phrased
sending their
institution.
sever-at seconds
such as nonsexist
request\
to respond.
or a particular
!)resently
At&r
at H given
files
These
Liniversity !i?r writers,
arc ~-c~KY;~Y. ri/ll~-tli,sl,lrrc.c,tl systcrnh. Uhcrs
system
AFR
center. The
hct of resource>
to individual
on rcsumc
writing.
anti on ~it~Itit~n t&mat.
later, can also bc mac!e available through
;t Gopher
or
www.
A FURTHER Which
users
should
as they do through an c-mai
be allowed lo avail themsclvcs Internet c-mail cxchangcs,
AFRx
USER ACCESS ot’ materials
being ofl:rcd‘!
has received thousands
districts
in British
offices.
new writing
universities
Columbia. tcntcrs
in Europe
cd’ file
t‘rom tcchnicat xtartin, ir their
a17ci Asia.
companies
all over the globe who surf
problem.
depending
centers’ instructional
on the server’s missions,
put. the bigger the computer restrictive supporting.
an institution’s If a system
writing
The
Purdue
alI over the \vorld: groups
on several
at NASA with
Unlimited
AFR.
from
and from
and funding.
is not ovcrtoarted
users
access may or may not btz :I financing.
and on writing Simply
can be ~~ccommodatcd; the ICSS
the witler
an audicnco it can rationalize
and it’ the campus
and 3s inexpensive
l’rom
in~ivi~lll~i
we csplorC in the followin g discussion). the more
tbr
2nd ~o~/~rniii~llt
these handouis.
continents.
capacity, on institutional
system.
mission
from
own eoltcctions
the Internet.
(an issue
access as both a kind OF “outreach” number ot’ users
rqncsts
Operating
are gencratty available to anyone with
I account that can scnct messages to ;I host computer.
example.
users
CONSIDERATION:
publicity.
wit! be seen as a benefit rather thorn a liability.
looks
upon intcrnationat
then an incrcasc
in the
On the other hand. ii’ the
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computer system is being asked to respond to more user requests than it can handle, if the institution feels it has responsibilities to its own students and no others, or if computer budgets are pinched to the point that international e-mail messages are discouraged (remember. e-mail may be cheap, but it’s definitely not free), then a writing center may think seriously about restricting access to local users.
GOPHERS
AND WORLDWIDE
WEB PAGES
Gopher is an international network of servers and databases that can be accessed by a common system of commands from nearly every other Gopher server in the world. One of Gopher’s most powerful features, in fact. is the ease with which users can access servers anywhere in “Gopherspace”-in Finland, in Japan, or at the other end of the state. By keying the command “gopher” at the system prompt. users can enter the Gopher system and explore its many nooks and crannies. Gopher, a menu-driven system, usually requires that its users know only how to operate the arrow keys on their keyboards and to hit the “RETURN” key when they wish to make a choice. Gopher servers at educational institutions typically offer information about the institution and its community, as well as information of scholarly interest. They also offer gateways to thousands of other Gopher servers and their resources. With just a few keystrokes, working their way through a series of menu choices and selecting options like “Other Gopher servers in the USA” or “All the Gopher servers in the world.” users can find themselves connected to Gopher servers in distant countries, all ripe for investigation as rich sources of information. The main Gopher server at the University of Illinois is typical of such systems and can be accessed in one of two ways. The slower but more user-friendly way is for users to log into their campus Gopher system and by moving through a series of hierarchicallyarranged menus reach the University of Illinois server. At Illinois, this entails selecting “Other Gopher servers in the USA,” then “Gopher servers in Illinois,” and finally “University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign.” A quicker but less user-friendly way to connect is to key in the command at the system prompt. Once connected, users can choose item “#9 Libraries and Reference Information” to get a menu that includes: “#6 Writers’ Workshop On-line Handbook” where the University of Illinois’ version of an OWL can be found. The On-lin~~ Hcrr~dhook contains a highly structured and organized database of information about bibliography formats-MLA. APA, and Old-MLA (notes and bibliography). It will be expanded to include information about punctuation, mechanics, and basic grammar. The Purdue University Writing Lab Gopher can bc accessed directly by keyin g the command <> at the user’s main prompt. Once there, users find a topical guide to writing skills handouts and can “Read.” “Save.” and/or “Print” files. To build a national pool of writing center online resources, the Purdue Gopher also lists other writing centers and their writing resources. The Gopher also enables users to immediately connect to these. Also. for users who want to get to the Internet to find information in a variety of disciplines, the Purdue Writing Lab Gopher provides a gateway to link to particularly rich sites of information we’ve located. The intent here is to assist students gathering information in preparation for writing research papers-to become their easy gateway out-a particularly important service for novices learning to surf the Internet. Gopher systems are recrctive. rml-time systems. They offer uniform. standardized responses to inquires and commands given online by users. Users remain connected to the Gopher system/server at all times; they gradually navigate their way into and out of file
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locations that are of interest. Files that users locate can easily be saved, printed and/or read off-line. Gopher’s real attraction is the opportunity for users to browse through a succession of files, to move up and down through menu trees, to pick and choose what they want to read before moving on. For this reason, files at Illinois are brief. specific, and compact. The Writers Workshop On-lint Hadhook at Illinois contains over 100 distinct files of bibliographic information. but each file’s average length is only between one and two computer screens of text. The files can each be located easily and read quickly, and, then, users can move elsewhere if they wish. By comparison. a file in the Purdue OWL usually contains a more complete discussion of a specific topic. Thus, the MLA file includes all material offered on MLA bibliographic inforn~ation. As with AFRs. system capacity and ext~-instituti~?n~~l access may become a problem at some campuses and with some servers. However. because Gopher was conceived as an international network, long-distance access is generally considered to be a part of normal operating practice and is usually provided for. In addition. Gopher file structures can easily be transferred among servers, so users frequently “move up” to a server with greater capacity. Gophers also permit a writing center to offer a panoply of services. At the University of Delaware. the university Gopher includes their writing center handouts and some general information about the center (Penna, 1994). Kennesaw State College’s writing center plans are for an online information center on the college Gopher that will provide various information services (Barrier, 1994). Because Gophers permit writers to roam the Internet’s vast resources and because students will also need to know how to download files, how to use e-mail, and so on. the Purdue Writing Lab is devel~~p~I1~hypertext tutorials aimed at assisting students with these processes. Howcvcr, because hypertext tutorials are not accessible on Gophers and because of the growing popularity of the WWW (which permits hypertext links) as a different and more visually compelling way to connect to the vast pool of lntcrnet resources, Purdue has constructed ;I WWW papc, on which hypertext programs will be available. Also available through its Web are writing ccntcr handouts (visually formatted in more readable ways). direct links to other online writing centers and their services. and immediate links to an even more vast univer\c of materials than are available through Gophers. Student novices will oventuatty learn how to search the Web on their own. but initially. with :I click of a mouse. they can st;lrt with the Purdue Writing Lab‘s home page. and link from the lob page. for cxampic. to the Library of Congcss’s page or to Carnegie Mellon’s page whcrc they can brolvse through the Etlt,\c.iol~etiiir &itmnira. ’
E-MAIL
DROPBOXES
AND NEWSGROUPS
In some respects, e-mail dropboxes are the easiest type of OWL to envision because they are simply an extension of the kind of e-mail messaging many of us engage in every day. Students send papers and/or writing-related questions to OWL e-mail addresses; the writing center’s tutor (or tutors) responsible for monitoring the c-mail box read and respond to inquiries in a timely fashion. Some OWLS invite students to send papers and questions about writing. At the University of Minnesota. online consulting is available both for texts that are sent in and for questions. Whole papers can be sent via POPMAIL (tier
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the Macintosh) or MINUET (for DOS). Students who don’t have access to either of these software programs copy their papers into an e-mail message (Healy, 1994). The writing center at SUNY-Albany invites students to send papers via their VAX e-mail (Coogan. 1994). At the City College of New York, David Tillyer (1994) reported that his writing center’s e-mail service invites papers, but funding and software problems have kept that OWL from flying. Other writing centers offering e-mail service are listed at the Purdue Gopher and WWW sites. E-mail dropboxes and newsgroups are intemctive. time-clisplcrced systems. Users send questions to an electronic site and wait for a response. Delays from several minutes to several hours (or even days) are possible, depending on question complexity, frequency of tutor logins, transmission delays, and other interfacing factors. For the most part, questions that users ask of writing center tutors on these systems are text-based. contextdriven, and situationally embedded. Because they often address issues of language use, stylistics, organization, and tone within the context of a specific paper or rhetorical situation, the questions do not lend themselves to standardized responses and prepackaged handouts. Tutors must engage each writing problem individually, with all of the corresponding demands on their time and effort. Sometimes this includes questions from the tutor asking for clarification, expanding the time required to respond to even the simplest problems. E-mail dropboxes may seem to invite quick questions in the same manner that Grammar Hotlines do, but Purdue’s experience indicates that the questions sent via e-mail are-for the most part-vastly different. Phoned-in questions tend to be focused on brief, sentence-level concerns or format issues that can be answered by checking a handbook. E-mailed questions, because they are presented as text messages, tend to be larger and more complex, asking about audience concerns, writing strategies, and so on. The e-mail environment also permits long, complex explanations from the sender, such as in a two-page question to Purdue’s OWL about hyphen use, sent by a Dutch engineer working in a Bell laboratory in Belgium. As the writer explained. his first language permits word combining in ways that English does not, so he began by asking for a general orientation to hyphenation in English. He went on to explain that, as an engineer, his need for clarity leads him to misuse hyphenation rules in English as he understands them, and he finally wound up asking for a rationale for breaking rules in the name of clarity. Such messages are very different from Grammar Hotline calls. Newsgroups may be less familiar to students and more awkward to use than dropboxes, but their intent and operation are essentially the same. Students can post questions to newsgroups using specialized software (such as READNEWS or NONEWS); tutors monitor these newsgroup postings at regular intervals, replying to questions soon after they appear. One important difference between these two posting systems exists, however: messages posted to a newsgroup are accessible to the general public. Users other than “official” tutors may choose to monitor newsgroups and may, in fact, choose to respond to student questions posted there. Unauthorized response may or may not be seen as a problem, depending in part on the quality of advice and/or information provided by “rogue” tutors and, in part, on the degree to which writing centers wish to open themselves to this kind of opportunistic collaboration. Ideally, on one hand, newsgroups moderated by campus writing centers could provide a forum for multiple student and tutor voices, creative brainstorming, and mutual support-not unlike activities that take place on newsgroups many of us participate in as professionals. On the other hand, students hoping for quick responses to simple questions from people working in the writing center may be annoyed, overwhelmed, or intimidated by a flurry of responses from people they
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never expected or cared to hear from.
( 1991) at the University these reasons.
of Missouri
The campus newsgroup
part. an underwhelming
response.
<> questions’!
The On-line
all
FURTHER
at the University
Corner
of Illinois
aet up by Eric
and not due to ;I lack
network
security
CONSIDERATIONS: COMPUTER
has drawn.
of questions
Fewer than a hantil‘ul
year.
Two more reasons:
Writers’
Crump
at Columbia has not drawn much interest. perhaps for
of publicity.
and computer
NETWORK LITERACY
for the most
have been posted on Why
‘so few,
literacy.
SECURITY
AND
Network Security Without OWL.
question,
security
but writing
account security
issues
center directors network.
account abuse by students, e-mail
be ~~ust~lt~~l
pyramid duty-often
to trc>,jan programs
with
good reason-to
The sad result of this difference
of a kw.
that writing
of services Convenience experts f&w. ‘I
might
is the case at Illinois.
swiftly
quashed by 21 university
don’t.”
was the tersely policy
arbitrary
An
worded ruling.
was network
c(~l~~pLlter services
(Gopher,
proposal
IRC.
access to all. The
workable
in a writing
only
way to cnsurc
back to them.
center setting,
tutor:
no single tutor would want to be rcsponsiblc
hours
a day, five days or rnori:
network
administrators
such accounts. responsibility
;I week.
But
of‘ a writing
However.
SOIIX institutions
of writing
ccntcrs which
center director. respond
to e-mail
and mmingly
act responsibly
obstacle.
questions
who hnvc
be acccssihle
is to have
tiropboxe3 by mm
all incoming
to bc
than one mail I?-
accounts will
LISCI-. witle institutions
who closely
have overcome this
was
place\
is only one of many
for e-mail
tbr n~ttnitorinp
may only permit
system
accounts:
SLILIIan accot~nt. Acccsx
hec~~sc multi-user
to track abuses to il sin&
whereas other institutions
system.
the needs of the
etc.) available to users without
that users
they must generally
the ahuses on the typex
dropbox
o-mail
Unl’ortunately.
\vith
it their
or. as (he compuler
reason given for this inflexible
~~n~~iiyr~ioi~sftp. telnet.
some way to trace violations
from
have c-mail
institutions.
user
computing
for an e-mail
computer accounts. and thcrc is no such thing as c-mail to one entails
institution‘s
manager. “Pcoplc At most
to
cvcry
needs of the many outweigh
The
security.
their
on the altar of security.
initial
systems
to
passwords,
they consider
of‘ users
01
(referral
often can be restrictions
through
“The
software
nearly
abuser;
protect the majority
can offer
put it.
specialists.
is a potential
in prioritic\
and case of use are sacrificed
and Trekkers
Such
centers
to the people in charge of are replete with stories
that steal other users‘
In the cycs of tomputcr
i~~~in~~~i~~~compufcr
an
that as ii~i~or~~~n~ as
from the exchange of copyrightcd
ranging
schemes.
when establishing
to discover
0 communities
Computer-usin,
as “wara”)
pirates
access to a university’s special
will
might bc to them. it is far, tar more important
the campus computing by software
must hc taken into consideration
Ih
not allt~w
may pi-ohibit
accounts a\ long as they arc the monitors
;KXX~~ to the account.
as is cvidcnt
on the Purtluc
in the growing
list
Gophci- and WWW
page.
Computer Cornputcr
illiteracy
institutions OWLS.
Most
among students.
has also proven students
simply
Illiteracy
particularly
to bc it rnqior
humanities
obstacle
do not LISC university
students.
to the successful computing
systt‘mx.
at our rcspectivc in~plemcntation
of
Our cxpcriences
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OWLS and informal surveys of students bear this out. One of us, for example, asked an upper-division English class of juniors and seniors how many class members had used the campus computing system-for e-mail, newsgroups. class assignments. etc. Onfy 3 students of 34 raised their hands. Those few students who do use university computers tend to use them for e-mail alone and, then, usuaily only to correspond with friends and classmates. Fewer students know what newsgroups are, and fewer than that read them with any regularity. At both Purdue and Illinois, the campus computing centers do not offer courses or training sessions for students interested in learning about newsgroups. Small wonder that so few messages were posted on the Illinois writing center newsgroup over the course of a year. The WOKIISprogram at Purdue was developed in part to answer the problem of students’ lack of familiarity with e-mail.
with
SYNCHRONOUS
CHAT SYSTEMS
Another computerized support service that a writing center might offer is a synchronous chat system, which offers students the possibility of connecting online directly with a tutor and engaging in an extended, typewritten conversation about a text. an issue, or a rhetorical problem. Synchronous chat systems are inreructhv. rdtime systems. Depending on the sophistication of the technology involved. students and tutors can converse electronically. view a draft onscreen, and/or share files and references with one another as they collaborate. Again, depending on the sophistication of the technology available, it is foreseeable that several students and/or tutors could link simultaneously, all working on the same document in different ways. The writing problems and situations addressed in these conversations are as unpredictable, complex, and varied as any writing problems are likely to be. Students and other users ask questions, get responses or new questions, and then respond. Both user(s) and respondent(s) are online silnultaneously, directly connected, and reacting to one another in realtime. True conversational interactions are played out onscreen, though with occasionally tortured slowness as both participants must take the time to write-rather than speak-their observations and commentary. Interactions fostered by this system are time- and tutor-intensive. Tutors must “listen” to what students are saying about their papers. consider these comments. and respond in much the same way as they would in a traditional conference. Students must do the same. Wilkie Leith (1993), director of the writing center at George Mason University, posted the following message to the WCENTER electronic bulletin board: One of the the PHONE
methods we’re “testing” (meaning we have yet to find real time to proceed) is component of VAX.
By setting appointment times.
having students send
the PHONE to have an inte~ctive conversation about the text. This process is clumsy, hard to ad,just to. and can be drafts through e-mail. annoying, but-for
downloading and then using
students (writers) who feel more comfortable on computers or cannot
be on campus, this process can produce some interesting results. The tutor and writer can “converse”
IN WRITING
about the draft.
Dave Coogan (1993a). at SUNY-Albany. compared it to his e-mail interactions:
has had a few tutorials
over VAX PHONE and
1 found the experience much closer to the f2f [face-to-face] tutorial-l
could hear the
1 had been I could no longer craft my “image” or my rhetoric of the tutor. This. most of ail, reminded me of the back-and-forth
silences, get a good sense of the pacing. and a better sense of who the person tutoring via e-mail actually was. It also felt more exposed:
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154
whcrc thinking on your feet is everyttung! I have hope Ibr VAX 1 think it‘s a little too obscure for the average student. And the idea of
style of f2f interaction Phone. but.. making virtual of the VAX.
Certainly,
appointments-while
tempting-may
he counter-intuitive
to the rhythms
user room access. etc.
are advantages
there
to this sort ol‘ interaction.
To begin
with,
to use the
system. students must do the one thing we work hardest to get them to do: write. must not only reflect composing,
upon their texts and respond to our questions:
by putting
this act alone
their thoughts and ideas into written
to be the mark
of a successful
They
they must do so by
form. Don‘t we often consider
conference?
In this respect.
then.
the
c(~nvers~ti~~ns facilitated by synchr~~n(~us chat systems achieve success from the moment a student question is first tr~nslnittcd. Another
benefit oC chat systems is the ease with which students can save transcripts
online conversations
to a fite and later re\iiew them when they are revising
discussed. No longer would we need to worry
ot’
the papers they
about how much students remembered
from
their conferences.
The entire confcrcnce
pressing
concern
would
would
have too much of the conference
available
to them and might be tempted to appropriate
tutors‘ words as their own (Baker,
1994: Spooner.
be whether
would be laid out before them. In fact. a more
students
1944).
A particularly
promising
students in a MOO, defined
direction
for synchronous
by Jennifer Jordan-Henley
chat systems is that of meeting as “a computer
space designed for
people to lop on and converse while buifdin, ‘7 a textual cnvil-(~liI~~ent.. (Jord~~n-Heni~~/, 1994). The Virtual Writing Center built by J(~rd~~n-~~niey and Barry Maid allowed students at J~~rd~ln-Henley’s college Maid’s
graduate
in Tennessee to receive
students in Arkansas.
( IWS), is that along with enthusiasm
online
The result. concluded for this new environment.
more interest in revision on the students’ part. Describing
tutorial
help from
Jordan-Henley
and Maid
there was significantly
another MOO environment,
the
On-line Writery at the University of Missouri. Eric Grump (1994a) detailed li)r us one experience of working online with a student. After some initial c-mailing back and forth with a tutor. [Tjhe student then showed up at DaedalusM00 comments. L&r. and
:md tnlkocl with the tutor about the tutor’s
the student postccl via c-moii a rcvid
version of the introduction.
He
I met at the MOO. 1 had his various drafts in one window ;tncf ;I rt_dtime di\cusxion
going with him in another. We rctkrrecl to his texts and talked ahout ways to improve ~~r~~llli~~ti(~nand phrasing. When necc~sary
I
CLIIhits f’rom the text and ptltctl
the discussion. Hc ~;as keeping if log oi’the discussion. so when one point,
what he meant by a particular
phrase. hc WI\
them into
1ashedhim to explain. at abk to capture his nttw
explanation (which was ;I whole lot clearer to mc). anti paste it right into the tlcvcloping text.
We were both more litcrallp engaged in the revision process. There was no pap
between discussion
and iniplementation.
Wc wcrcn’t tdkin, (7 about writing.
We \vere
tloiyq it.
THE
INSTITUTIONAL
MlSSION
With the varieties of electronic c(~n~i~ui-~ti~)ns in mind, WC turn now to Iocal issues that also factor into shaping an OWL. and ant of’the most iiiip~)rt~nt of such issues. ax we have inelltion~d, is the mission of‘ the instituti~~n in which a writing center resides. The degree to which an institution will support a writing center’s online initiative depends on whether an OWL complements the institution’s stated missions. For example, when an institution
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values its forward motion in the use of technology, a writing center’s OWL is likely to be viewed as valuable in being yet another bit of visible evidence that the school is at the cutting edge of computer use. Research institutions may also regard OWLS as a marvelously rich source of research data, for these projects can be studied in a variety of disciplines, from very divergent perspectives. Of merit also is the public visibility that some institutions may gain when their writing center’s work becomes valuable to the local community or to lnternet users everywhere. Where community outreach is important, the institution will value an online service that is also available to the local community and to area high schools. Or this kind of outreach may be seen as a good recruiting tool for the institution. In such cases, OWLS need to be accessible from the Internet so outside users can enter the system through e-mail, a Gopher, or the WWW. But as we have mentioned, this also means that OWLS are open to use from anywhere in the world. If an institution does not want to expend its limited resources outside the campus, then an OWL should be aimed at-and only accessible to-the institution’s students and faculty. Another institutional consideration is the degree to which it promotes accessibility to university services for all students. Physically disabled students, students with learning disabilities, hearing-impaired students, part-time students, students with jobs that leave them little free time during the hours of the writing center’s operation, and commuting students are likely to find an OWL far more convenient than attempting to journey to the writing center. On a large university campus, an OWL offers accessibility to students who have no time to trek across long distances or who rarely visit that part of the campus where the writing center is located.
WRITING
CENTER
GOALS
Perhaps the largest set of options facing writing center directors are those that will shape OWLS’ configuration within the context of a writing center’s goals. For example, directors must decide to what degree OWLS will dominate a center’s work. This is a question of what constitutes augmenting present services and when an OWL seems to take over and consume too much of a center’s resources-and a director’s energies. Centers also need a clear sense of what their present student population is and who OWL users will be. If centers view OWLS as outreach to new populations, then options exist to explore in locating those populations, in considering how they can be served and what they need. At institutions with large populations of commuting students, a service that offers opportunities to interact with tutors at their convenience may be the most useful emphasis-if those communicating students have online access (as some do in their work environments). At Purdue, another target populatic 1 are writers (especially novice Internet browsers) who profit from tapping into Internet resources for papers they are writing in various disciplines. Another major focus of Purdue’s energies at present is on developing online hypertext tutorials aimed at giving these students strategies for searching the Internet and helping them learn how to download what they find. This expands a writing center’s goals so it also becomes a resource center for writers, providing opportunities to learn new tools for writing that may not be taught in courses. Yet a different goal for an OWL, provided at Dakota State University, is a set of services intended both as a faculty resource and as a student tutorial environment (Ericsson, 1993). People who configure or plan OWLS must also weight other options and make decisions as to which aspects of writing center theory and pedagogy are to be retained and which cannot be replicated exactly. In other words, there has to be some degree of
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156
ncccptance of‘ (and ;I sense Dialogue
online
nonsynchronic immctliutc
of challenge
c;Ln be interactive talk
situations
back-and-forth
sessions.
All
(not
dialogue in online
“ininimalist
tutoring”
LIntI other
drafting
the students’
I99 I ). Onscrcen
(those
ancl written
products.
mcl
race
and social cues. Voices nornlally
are Icss
likely
to impact world
that writing
The
politics.
of avail;tble rcsourccs.
rcccptivc to new challenges have
massive
silence,
personnel No nlattcr their
student
li)r scientific
service
that
will
CENTER
we can help
computing
argun~nt IKQ
strain
rcsourcc4
computing
knowledge
to off&
;lssist
training How
ccntcrs
or short courses?
even
may
stonewalling
policy
Inore. 2s
acln~inistrators about
Eric
in the computing Crunip
in
the writing
interaction
set
yet another
Grump
( I994b)
center. \ve think sugestecl,
such
thereby
_ they. have to worr!
is mininlal
dtwarc
center. xnd
of
if‘ the
yaining
we the
about. III C:ISCS
where ;I writing
;I\ I’urciuc‘4
in the degree IO which
Does
tactor in setting
\\OI
thq
ma!;
center hvc
to
i\ bc
w:uit to OI- ;lrc able to
u p OWLs.
Do \tudunts hil\.C
the coniputin, 0 ccntcr (or son1e course)
ccntcr
available’? Do all students
in assisting
students
may dictate sonic of these concerns.
by its assistance. control
enthusiastic
about teachin, (7students ho\\ to use c-tnail.
is ;I nl;Lior
is the computing
University
01‘ computer-ccntel
tiIne-conslII11ing~expcricnce.
example.
la good documentation
there is not ;I university-wide center
vary
LISC, this
to coniputin g Illbs’!
ilggrcssive
literate?
or they III+
cloors i\ met M,ith
the way.
computing
student conlputer
easy ;Iccess
on their
is macle. Sony
for one Icss responsibilitv
scrvica.
can
of‘ Iociil
I-‘crsonneI IIMV bc vq
Iill- the hum;ulitics.
be less than
For
sessions
of online
online
developed to smooth Because
center.
training
ccntcr’s gratitude
where student determined
the coquting such
administrators.
IO get the attention
USC. or they
ccntcr is less than enthusiastic
can ot’i’er to hold
in dcvclop~nent of OWL4
01‘ v;Irious
recommenclod that when WC‘arc: tl-ying to win fricncls wqs
and wm.
inordinatcl!,
their
except through li~ccless.
trying
often-the
in ;I
ancl stcrcotypcs
;IS well
or of computin g center priorities.
how oloqucntly--or
priorities
ha\c to learn to
;I setting
of personalitie\
or hostility
to the
between
in this
vicwecl ;IS personal
frustrating-:&
thus. evident
arc losses
In those CLICS whcrc hnocking
indifference.
can be ;1 highly
bring
contact may seern to ci&umani/c
anti new uses of computers
dil‘l‘erent agendas.
very
thcrc
stutlents
ancl clearer.
centers are wilin s to Lissist
It may be ;I matter
greatly
But
also
;iI-row 4. inserts.
al\o n~;~n mcctinf
will
bc stronger
(;~s in the
text will
in the clisparit!
:u-c not immcdiatcly
COMPUTING;
degree to which computing
vary
sonic tutors.
onscreen
shy rnq
the tutorial.
centers have traditionally
Although
mcctlny
~1s the lack of the personal
THE
copy that
th;lt become cvidcnt
the subtle
ovt’r to them
scratched out option\.
in the hard
arc.
disembodied
eliminating
by
rely on other clues ;IS to who writers lexical
bc text driven.
Hrods,
the
ti~ce~to-ti~ce tutoring
cliscu\sed
evident
world where gender. ethnicity.
in
is turned
learnin g dis:tbilities
conversations
so procluctive
will
cngagc in
ma> not cxperiencc
that control
processes
techniques
center) and to possible
they
environments.
and students
to students
strategies
have fewer clues to composing
option).
that is
configuration\
new tutorial
but if tutors
in ;I “chat”
clarific;ltion
ancl body cues that indicate
voice
in incluirin, ~7 into)
and collaborative.
mandate (or resources) by its inability,
the clcgree to which
in becoming
li)r computer will
computc~
but in those c;~scs whcrc
by its incliffcrencc.
students
provitle
get ilccounts’!
LISC OWLS.
literacy.
the computing
OI- by its capacity
fi)~
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Writing
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157
PROGRAMMER
Yet another major consideration is the skill level, creativity, and philosophical orientations of the people who actually set up OWLS. Some programmers who delight in the complexities of their creations also see merit in user-friendly systems; others simply delight in the complexities. No matter how much coordination there is between the writing center staff who are planning their online environment, at some point plans turn into reality through program designers’ abilities, ingenuity, and general approach to creating software. Complications can develop. systems can be created that seem infested with glitches and bugs, and environments can be friendly or not. Or ingenious solutions and clever additions may be introduced by imaginative program designers. whereas others less imaginative may settle for more limited or unnecessarily complicated ways to do things. Moreover. from the perspective of the writing center. there may be preferencesfor example. keeping records-that can be easily dismissed by program designers who do not see the importance of building systems in which they have to work around such preferences or who have to worry about how to incorporate them in the software. It becomes important to find programmers who will attempt to understand a writing center’s goals, methods. and philosophy as well.
STUDENT
COMPUTER
LITERACY
As mentioned earlier, a critical factor in setting up an OWL is the computer literacy of student users. By and large, the experiences of those who have fledgling OWLS aloft seem to indicate that while e-mail is a viable option for connecting to students who want to send questions and/or drafts of papers, electronic mail is not something at which most undergraduates are adept. Because it is likely that students become more familiar with uses of computers beyond word processing as they progress through college, writing centers that serve mainly first-year students may find this population least likely to find e-mail a convenient process. Groups who might benefit from an e-mail connection are commuter students sufficiently affluent to have home modems, physically handicapped students who have specialized (and networked) computer equipment available to them elsewhere on campus, students who use networked computers in areas of a large campus remote from the writing center, and students at satellite locations off-campus or in residence halls with networked computers.
WRITING
CENTER
TUTORS
Another factor that shapes the particular configuration of an OWL is the writing center staff, their attitudes toward online interaction, and their level of enthusiasm. Tutors who see this new opportunity for a somewhat different and potentially exciting means of communication with students will look upon the inconveniences and system breakdowns, the training period, and the struggle to find an “online voice” as opportunities to grow in new directions and to meet students in a new environment. Other tutors, themselves not adept at e-mailing, who haven’t made it part of their lives, or who are suspicious about this cyberspace universe, will proceed with more grumbling, hesitancy, and uneasiness about giving up the face-to-face interaction they value and thrive on, a situation already noticed by Jordan-Henley and Maid in their MOO project (1995). As Paula Gillespie
158
HARRIS AND PEMBERTON
(1994)
has noted, directors
must work
have to see tutor preparation slowly
until tutors
they’ve
If OWLS
tutors
than printing
WC have
may need practice responding
option of printinf
the
holding
messages.
It works,
will
comments
get sucked
into
tentativeness tutors
find
can bc left
away from
strategies
onscrcen
and a vocahulq
through
copied
collaboration
writers’
into
text
of text onscreen rather reported.
but
rarely
through
the way
UK
the text
in separate
mail
(Baker.
Spooner.
the
with
students.
;I concern
Online
of Lvhcre online
discussed
interaction
in Writiq
L,trlj
is also problematic
move tutoring
of the more
tutors‘
can be used more
questions
not approached thoughtfully-to
and to take on the characteristics
also. is
tutorial.
may appear on the
responses
already
the
Of concern.
and. ultimately. ethical
the
Moving
tahcs practice 21s
In a filce-to-face
But onscrecn
indicating
answers.
to a true discussion
raising
1994).
intonation
delivcrcd
response.
thus
begins.
a question or comment thrown
with
Ihr OWL-ing
papers.
1994;
in ways that overcome the inherent
suggests
consciousness.
students’
in that it has the potential-if collaboration
in a
then hard-
at SUNY-Albany
along
thought processes
ends and plagiarism
Nc~.\/rf/c/. articles
margins
hanging
of the permanence of the tutors’
page. fittered
tutors
to papers.
commentin@
Although
mere questionianswcr
may become part of writers’
directly,
before
to the end or commcntinf
of the comment.
the question words
It also means training
but it is hard to get used to: it‘s ;I lot to hold in your head at one time!
conversation
interaction
and directors
may mean moving
the screen-scrolling
also need help learnin g how to respond
LI tutorial
This
to large chunks
;I student’s paper
tendency of onscreen text to appear authoritative.
online
OWLS.
begun to read the test onscrccn:
and either
into
not against them,
are going to provide a space to respond
more often we let ouraclves
Tutors
staffs,
successful
out a paper to read it. As Dave Coogan ( I993b).
successfully
it.
their
are ready to take on online interaction.
number of ways. copy oriented
with
as part of building
Inmiliar
away
respon\c
from in the
01’ a paper.
CONCLUSION As
we have tried
to demonstrate
cannot handle others. challenges,
OWLS
here, OWLS
can meet a variety
can also take a variety
of shapes.
extend our reach, and tnake us ask finally
of needs just
as they
and they can create new
what our rationales into--and
students
move into-a
future
Internet’!
which
will
include
we want to reach new groups
Do
writing.
of students
access to the center’! Given the changing demographics part-time importance These
of considering students
retrain. many
often
work
and as a result writins
face-to-race significant
centers
full
time.
they
are often
are available. skills,
take, they promise with
have
lamilies.
to commute
As much
as WCs
must
Selfe
( 1994)
warned
us
of
the
ways:
unable
they
who don’t have easy
education as increasing
Dickie
status,
needs in new
also
they
need
recognize
to school to
are returning
to schools
during
to protect that
this
the hours
and develop very
strength
that their is a
to a growing number of students.
are uppermost
in the planning
access to online computers.
major component arc f’amiliar
they
interactive burden
If such considerations off-campus
their
help our
researching.
in 21 service
then providing
that assists
this
of OWLS tutorial
population.
to lcad us into interestin, (7 new directions. exploring
new paths.
and if these students interaction
Whatever
online
will
have be a
shapes our OWLS
Fortunately.
writing
cvcn as WC wonder where thcv will
centers
lead us.
Online
Writing
159
Labs
Muriel Harris is a professor of English and Director of the Writing Lab at Purdue University; editor of the Writing Lab Newdefter and author of numerous articles on writing center theory and pedagogy and several books, including her most recent text. the Prentice Hnll Reference Guide to Gmmmar NIKI Usage. 2nd edition (1994). Her e-mail is . Michael A. Pemberton. an Assistant Professor of English at the University of Illinois, Urbana-Champaign. directs the Writers’ Workshop and writes a monthly column on Writing Center Ethics for the Writing Lab Ne\i9sletter. His e-mail is: .
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